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"Oh Aspen, as long as I have a face, you’ll have somewhere to sit..." Mitts... Really such deliciously naughty thought from our favorite Horn-ball General, gives me the impression the dudes about burst any minute.

I love Button boy... such a clever character, he exist apparently only to get in the Silver generals way... an operative sent of course by Jake in a manor of speaking to assassinate the generals plans to get in little Cadet Aspens pants.
Only I think Button boy has the same goal... can't wait to see who wins the race.
Can't wait to read more soon! G

VERY GOOD! PLEASE WRITE MORE

Oh I am so happy you updated so soon!
very yummy. I love the general's predatory thoughts and behavior towards Aspen. I can't wait til he finally gets him. I do hope Aspen is kicking and screaming for some of it :)

lol... i liked the way u described everything that was going on, on the outside as well as in his head

Chapter 5.6 "What's Your Favourite...?!! Hmmm??!!!"

I like "The Boy That Liked to Play with My Buttons!"
(TBTLTPWMB, for short)
He seems a really friendly sort!! (Who also wants
our young, young, young... cadet!

Getting to know you...
Getting to know all, about.. you...

Seems like the beginnings of a beautiful relationship...
If only Aspen would cooperate!

Can't wait 'till his eyes (and other parts) get pried wide open!!
(Too crude!!) Sorry!

Thanks,
R

Sorry for all the hiccups!!

I love the way you show each persons point of view. update soon

Chapter 2

OH MY GOD!!!

The General is such a perv!!!! HA!!
His musings on what's been delaying the
cadet are hysterical!!

"Perhaps this lover was giving him a pounding to remember him by,
thrusting and humping into him so hard, making his rear end so sore..."

Oh my goodness!!

Thanks,
R

Chapter 3.4 "The Boy That Liked to Play with My Buttons?!!!"

I don't know his name but he's...

So that's how the Cadet got there so out of breath!! HA!

I really like this two point of view thing you got going
here... People really do see what they want to see!
Or ... people really see the same thing differently!! Or, it
just depends if they have a perverted POV or an innocent
one. Skillfully done!!

Thanks,
R

Chapter 4.5 "... down... down... down... until my tongue lapped around his..."

This General is something else!!
What a horny toad!!! HA!

Can't wait 'till he actually get some, but,
I wonder if it's gonna be what he expects with
such an innocent boy!!!

And what of the boy who plays with buttons?!! Hmmm?

Thanks,
R

Aspen is being a snotty little shit.

Will he get his come-uppance??