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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What I love most about your writing is the intense quality to the intropection. The lust is palpable in every word. That mixed with the Generals utter confidence and sense of entitlement make him a very scary/delicious character to follow. Very, very sexy.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Get your update in here....!!!
Is needed.....
Is needed.....
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I doubt that's what Aspen is doing... He seems too innocent for that since he is a virgin and all... But it is wishful thinking XD.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I wonder whats going on in Aspens mind! Did he even see the erection or is the general mistaken, like he has been so many times?
And I KNOW Aspen is not getting banged by that other kid! I wanna see whats happening!!!! What is poor Aspen going through???
I look forward to your next update!!!
And I KNOW Aspen is not getting banged by that other kid! I wanna see whats happening!!!! What is poor Aspen going through???
I look forward to your next update!!!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol poor aspen doent know what hes in for
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter!!!
the trials that the poor general has to go through to get aspen. i hope he manages to get an "untainted" aspen :)
grin
thanks
the trials that the poor general has to go through to get aspen. i hope he manages to get an "untainted" aspen :)
grin
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aspen!! The General has such a dirty image of him... but I love is perv imagination! xD
I look foward the next chapter ^w^
I look foward the next chapter ^w^
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is great! I just started reading it today, as I thought that I have so much catching up to do in AFF. I'm soo glad I started reading this! Aspen is so wonderfully clueless, innocent virgin boy. Hehe, so many lusting after him. And hm... The button boy or the general, who will claim him first? I'm guessing for the later. *rubs hands together* yay, update soon please! ^___^
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, the sexual frustration of the handsome general is fascinating to watch! What a hornball, its all he thinks about. That cadet doesn't stand a chance, and now, poor Pike, too.
He seems to get thwarted constantly, and I can just see him with the earring, taking his frustion out on the hapless soldier.
Another wonderful chapter, you capture the general's obsession, and the cadets insecurity with the same ease. And you leave all of us wanting more.
Lots more!
He seems to get thwarted constantly, and I can just see him with the earring, taking his frustion out on the hapless soldier.
Another wonderful chapter, you capture the general's obsession, and the cadets insecurity with the same ease. And you leave all of us wanting more.
Lots more!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, how cool is this? I find a good story, read it and it's update on the very same evening ^__^ This general and his thoughts amuse me, and how different they are from Aspen's! You do this POV changing so beautifully that I find myself envying it. And I can't wait to read Aspen's POV and see what really went on with that button boy! I don't believe that they really did it. Aspen may keep his virginity still?