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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah this is just so good! :) I'm happy that you updated and I knew that the button boy wouldn't get him so easily! I'm sorry, I think he'll always be a button boy to me even when we got to know his real name :P Hm, somehow I have the feeling that Aspen won't end up with Pike's group after all though, hihi, well, we shall see. Aspen sure gets in trouble though, so wonderfully oblivious, all lusting after him and the poor boy doesn't have a clue what he does to the general, so amusing *grins*
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a bug misunderstanding gosh! Whats going to happen?! haha you are very creative.. love where this is going.. Its going to be so hot when our handsome general takes Aspen into his bed.. i am going to read the next one now~
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Zaphara needs to get his mind out of the gutter. Poor Aspen, those men are going to make his life a living hell. Hehe...camp slut.
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG your story is just brilliant!!!!!!!
I just couldnt figure out what Aspen's POV was going to be for some of those scenes. You do such an amazing job of showing a stream of events being interpreted in two completely different ways!!!
I really look forward to your next chapter!! I do hope the general finds out that botton boy didnt have his way with Aspen!!!
Thanks for updating!
I just couldnt figure out what Aspen's POV was going to be for some of those scenes. You do such an amazing job of showing a stream of events being interpreted in two completely different ways!!!
I really look forward to your next chapter!! I do hope the general finds out that botton boy didnt have his way with Aspen!!!
Thanks for updating!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow - Not at all what I was expecting. I really had no idea that Aspen would actually be attracted to Zaphara.
Of course, I also thought Belfour was a good guy.
Think I'll give up guessing and just wait for you to reveal.
Of course, I also thought Belfour was a good guy.
Think I'll give up guessing and just wait for you to reveal.
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on!!! They both want each other, just have them get together!! Pretty please??
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Pike, he actually had the balls to try and rape him! Cant wait to see what happens next! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that little cadet, he's sure having a hard time of it in this chapter, taking it well, though, despite all the teasing, and being pounced on. If he only knew... I'm still smiling. You have this drawwwnnn ouuttt so well, and did I mention its addicting? Well done, as always. ^_____^
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loooooove this fic ^.^ Omg I just realized even though this is an original the general is totally Sephiroth and the cadet is Cloud XD That's awesome
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!!
The general got it ALL wrong - and ends up with Pike??
Just too, TOO funny!
The general got it ALL wrong - and ends up with Pike??
Just too, TOO funny!