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for OBSESSION

by Mitts

person Anon
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
but is he?....
person Audri
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh my gosh!
update again!
your totally evil.
btw...i love the story
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person Kiira
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I think I'll soon become obsessed with this story *snickers* Ah yes, finally they're alone! I was like YAY and then I realised that yup, you're going to torture us with waiting little more because there will be Aspens POV, too. Not that I mind! not at all =D Hehe, and should I feel sorry for the button boy and his ass? Hm, lets see, *thinking* er, no :P
Thanks for this chapter, can't wait for what is to follow!
person katzies
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally the chapter I've been waiting for is going to come!!! I hope...
person Laie
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bwhahahahahahahah "poor" cadet! *cackles evilly* I can't wait to see some "action"! Update soon, for the Love of Yaoi!!! xDD
person SODA
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally he gets him! I really dislike the mongrel, he's so touchy and pushy. I rather the general be that..Anyways, cnat wait for next chapter! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Since Zephy is so sure, I suspect he'll be disappointed again.

But how will Aspen pull it off? (And, does he even want to?)
person Vylest0
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so friggin' hot--especially 'Zephy' and Aspen...'specially Aspen. Lol, geez, does everyone want some of him? I can't wait 'til Zephy get some from him. He's gonna tear blondie up, (hee hee!!) Viva la fangirl yaoi luv, heh heh!:)) Update soon!!! PLEASE!!!
person dutsada
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow cutie Aspen is actually having the hots for our general already! More please!
person cricri
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So it begins....yes my child, embrace the new and improved you....