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by Mitts

person xXmarylinXx
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE--> THIS FIC IS PERFECTION!!!!
person LadyDa
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, This is just FFVII
At least be ORIGINAL with your OC's.
That said- It's well written.
person RJaneyP
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Mitts that was mean...you couldn't write just a little bit more... to make G Happy...your getting to the good parts now!
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you evil evil person! I can't believe you left it off at that spot! Well, actually I can. Awesome cliff hanger!
I am now quite desparate for the next two chapters, since the next one is Aspen's view point, I can't wait to get back to The captains and see what he does!!!
Your story is getting hotter and hotter!
Please update soon!
:)
person Camui
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sdlfkjskldfj WHY ISNT THERE ANOTHER CHAPTER SKLFJSLKFJSLKFJS
Dx

i'm waiting (im)patiently for it.
.____.;;
:D

person shiden
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEAL*

god!!!! i can't wait for the new chapter...
this is great!!! more pelase
person dutsada
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Zephara got alone with Aspen! I was squealing by the end of the chapt with happiness! more pls~
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww.. a cliff hangar. noooooooo!!!!!
person shadow
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!! i cant wait to see how aspen will react!!!
person vivid white
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love reading that horny general's thoughts. Every one of the others must have a good idea after all that happened about what he's thinking, except of course, for Aspen. He won't. Can't wait to read his take on it. This is such a gooooood story. Thanks, again.

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