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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! Now with Aspen's POV outta the way, can't wait for the next chapter (squee!!) And as for Belford...go to hell, lol. He just torments poor Aspen sooooo horribly. What a royal, albeit horny, jerk! It seems that Aspen is quite oblivious to Zephy's attraction to him however...please just don't make him keel over in exhaustion after that long trek in the heat and no sleep the prior night without some fanservice luv, lol! Great storyanywayz. Much love. Update soooonnn!!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I didn’t have to worry about the General seeing me naked…after all, it wasn’t as if he found me attractive or anything, was it?" Hehe, aw, soo oblivious little Aspen, he's just too cute! =) and NOW we get to wait for the FUN chapter *snickers* I really can't wait to read what's coming and how it is coming, lol
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are such a tease!!!
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cant wait until you update again :)
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cant wait until you update again :)
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg... you really are one for torture arent you!!!!! and i thought that this chapter was going to be THE chapter... *runs around in frustration* update quickllyy!!!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice revenge for Belford, forced to go with those two and the worm turns, now he's the prey? Perfect. Liked that. Alot. So the general finally has Aspen all alone, but the poor boy's had no sleep for two days and walked all day. Just when he makes his move, the cadet'll fall asleep on him. ::grin:: Or not. Since the attraction seems to be mutual.
IMHO- I think this IS worthy of publication, Mitts, it's a clever piece of writing. Just so you know, I'd buy it!!
IMHO- I think this IS worthy of publication, Mitts, it's a clever piece of writing. Just so you know, I'd buy it!!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! You're terrible, you know that?! Why oh why haven't they hooked up yet??? Please, pretty please, have the oh-so-sexy General and Smeldley (sp?) get together in the next chapter, it would be sooooo amazing!!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap! Wait till he finds out lol! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know nothing about FFVII...(Except I assume 'FF' is Final Fantasy...)
Would the relationships be clearer if I knew who these people are??
Guess, as it is, I just have to wait to see how things work out. Z and A really are gonna get together? And live happily ever after??
Would the relationships be clearer if I knew who these people are??
Guess, as it is, I just have to wait to see how things work out. Z and A really are gonna get together? And live happily ever after??
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that poor ignorant sod!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha such an oblivious tease