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for OBSESSION

by Mitts

person shiden
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaahhaahah the poor general!!!!!!

:) love it
person shadow
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! hw could u leave it like that!!!!!!!!!!!!

your too evil to be human!!!
person RJaneyP
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks...........giving.... just for us. a real turkey tease! Ah Ha I hope the Infamous Button boy, brought the pumpkin pie...for it seems that little Aspen already has the cream. Poor General! Yum your great naughty story alway hits my G Spot..........G
person vivid white
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, is Zaphy up for a threesome? Does Aspen see all this differently than the general? ::grin:: Thanks, Mitts, for the smiles, I needed them.
person Rosei
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've GOT to say, that the flirty way you write is most unique!!!

Every new chapter is a wild hoot and the characters are just so
wrapped up in their own little worlds that it's just so amazing that
you make this all work so smoothly!!!

I love it how little Aspen is now, so HOT for the General after listening
to his hot night of pounding, sweaty, sex through the tent walls!!!

Fun, fun, fun!!!!
Thanks,
R

person dutsada
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh Gosh! The next chapter IS it! It would very horrible of me to pressure you for the next chapter but i hope you would ASAP! Love your story lots and lots!
person Kip
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tantalising! Keep it coming .... Purr.
person LadyDa
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nothing to get grumpy about, love.
Just bugs me that it's in the originals section.
That kinda thing, you know requires OCs and stuff.
I still like the writing style, Overall it's a good story.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait to see what the general does when he sees Aspen naked looking for his pj's!
Thanks for the update!!!!
person NeonTokyo
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omfg I love how quickly you update! >.< Thank you for being such a good writer!