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for OBSESSION

by Mitts

schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...That was a letdown...I'm starting to hate that guy myself >=[ But the wait makes me more interested too, so update soon! :) Please. ^_^
person Rosei
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14.15 "Not a Happy Camper"

HA! I'll say!! He's in for a rude awakening!!
And what of TBTLTPWMB?! He's being treated so
poorly that I find I'm feeling really sorry
for him, even though he wants a piece of (Aspen)
the action! Maybe I like him 'cause he's a little
dense! Don't know! Thanks for the chapter!!

R
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cut the general some slack before he bursts!
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool!
I loved the line about Aspen licking his lips and the General thought to himself, "Oh yeah, I know what that means, he wants to taste my cock!"

That was hot!
Glad you updated so soon!
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next one!
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! This is hilarious.
person SODA
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess Bottn Boy just wanted to annoy them...Poor General lol. Wonder where Aspen went, cant wait for more! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person shadow
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the general is so dangerously horny...lol
person Rosei
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13.14

Little, desirable, Aspen finally gets some action!
His POV is so cute!!! He's in love!!
And here come Button Boy!! Can't wait!!!

Thanks,
R
person RJaneyP
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My Dear Mitts "The Final Fantasy here"... is that Little Aspen remains so truely benignly Innocent, even after wanting and liking what the delightful big bad silver-haired General was doing to him. I insist something be must be done about that annoying...interfering Button boy this instant! How about the General wacks of his head...that ought to do it, or at least it will slow him down a bit! Bloody G, votes that he gets removed from the gene pool! Let see A vote OF hANDS>>>PEOPLE! Gee I want more now...for it's so very very GOOD! Giggle