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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15
Poor frightened Aspen!!! He's terrified!!!
Is there no one to help this young innocent?!!
Is there no one to hear his cries for help?!
(Or is that yelps for help?) Aspen will go back
into that tent kicking and screaming!! Maybe he'll
get carried back in?
Thanks,
R
Poor frightened Aspen!!! He's terrified!!!
Is there no one to help this young innocent?!!
Is there no one to hear his cries for help?!
(Or is that yelps for help?) Aspen will go back
into that tent kicking and screaming!! Maybe he'll
get carried back in?
Thanks,
R
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait till he finally catches up to the little cadet!
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Aspen! He sounds absolutely terrified! Such a wild imagination...lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor Aspen, I love how you set it up for the general to do some comforting... er, if he can find the cadet again. That general is scary when he's mad!!... if those two would just talk to each other, but then... there'd be no story, lol. Loved it, Mitts. Thanks.
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor aspen never gets a break... hope to see more soon!!!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved both chapters! Aspen's POV was every it as good as I had thought it would be! Soo innocent, so sweet.
And God that button boy is annoying! hehe, but hm... I feel that Aspen is in danger now, alone outside with that moron, hopefully General will realise this as well.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
And God that button boy is annoying! hehe, but hm... I feel that Aspen is in danger now, alone outside with that moron, hopefully General will realise this as well.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! i really love that you like my story since i REALLY LOVE YOURS!!! i hope you update SOON!
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
where else is this story posted?
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Did he want me to go chase him, and rip the pants from him? Kinky…'
That line there cracked me up real good. XD Oh yes, you're one fine comedian.
That line there cracked me up real good. XD Oh yes, you're one fine comedian.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aspen almost 'lost it'- but instead the general did... I wouldn't want to be in the mongrels place right about now! Reading Aspen's take on all this should be very interesting, as always. The general scared me in this chapter, must have scared him too??!! You did that well, Mitts and can't wait for you to post more.