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Loved it!!! It had a good climax lol (no pun intended)I wish it didn't have to end but i guess, it had been great keep up the good work. <3

...I honestly don't see why you didn't just make this a Final Fantasy 7 fanfic, since the plot and characters are obvious rip-offs(even their appearance) of Cloud, Sephiroth, etc.

Bravo on this! Certainly, one of the best stories in this archive.

i found this after looking at one of the other authors i was reading and they had it in their uhm reccomended erm but anyways yeah i liked it haha poor zaph .... though button boy i want to kick him really in the head lmao but i think the last part was the best... hm i mean in a funny sort of best way because haha zaph went from obsessing over Aspen's ass and now its the other way around... though we all know he has 0% chance of ever getting his obsession. hehe poor little blondie.

I've read your story the first time it was written. An since then I have been trying to remember your name and the title of your story. Now after a year and more I've finally found it. I love the switch between POV's that you have going on here.

Hey,

I just finished this story and I have to beg for a sequel! I feel like there are so many things that you still haven't touched! I have a million things running down my mind; questions that need to be answered!
Are you planning on writing the sequel? I would really love to read it if you continue with it. I'm offering to help you with whatever you might need, a beta reader or someone to exchange ideas, that's how much I want it, lol!
Thanks for sharing your story with all of us.

Take care,
Helen

Dunno what happened, but I only read the last chapter now 0_0 Well, better late than never, right?

This was truly an entertaining story Mitts! It made grin madly many times.
You have a talent to write and I would like to see a sequel to this. I'd like to see Aspen making his new obsession true :P I think general would't give it to him that easily though. *grins* Anyway, it would be interesting for sure! ^_^

And what ever happened to the button boy?

-C-

Wow... I did not know you wrote this story.. I just love it... Running blind will be posted every other day until i get caught up... Thanks so much for your reviews.... I really appericate them...

It's odd when I've seen the same story on fanfiction.net's FFVII category...

LOL! Omg, that ending was so much love! I just found this story today and read it all in a go. This was absolutely HILARIOUS! Totally made my day. It took me a while before I realized that the main characters were actually based off of FFVII characters. Pretty brilliant piece of writing this is, turning porn into a plotted out comedy. I love how you alter the General and Cadet's perspectives so that we can see their misunderstandings. I forget how many times I've laughed out loud because of their foolishness. I really like the way you write and I do look forward to a sequel, even though I absolutely prefer the Generally topping for ever :P Thanks again for such an interesting story and for the wonderful smut.