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That sucks. The computer crashing, not the story. The story is really really good. If you still need a beta, I'd be happy to. I hope you can update soon.
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You've built up a pretty good plot...^_^ i hope your computer is ready to go soon!

awh and i was liking this story. Hmmm, you seem like a guy because you wrote the guys side much more better then the girls side, I wonder if im correct. Anyways, I love these two sided stories where they show exactly what each character is thinking. I read the silver kiss and its two sided just like this, thats probably why i like it so much. Anyways write me at DemonMina@yahoo.com when you do the second chapter i want to read it. ^^

I like where this is going... the format of the story and the use of the language is very good... The storyline is quite original and you left me wanting more... very promising start!

You're off to a good start.