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for Highschool is Hell

by szaugg

schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Delightful! Missing the smex, but still, beautifully written. A little angst, a little tenderness, a little humour, a lovely bad guy, but a lovelier hero . . . and the happy ending to satisfy my sappy self.

Two thumbs waaay up, luv.

Ta!
person Leeana69
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that.
"I need sex to live."
"You need to shut up to live."
I laughed so hard I almost fell off my chair. Good times, had by all.

You are my hero. ^-^
person Leeana69
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The fluff is crushing me with it's fluffiness....saaaave meeeeee. :o

I loved it, it was amazing...almost as Good as Josh Groban's voice...which I am completly in love with. :salutes:
person Dracros
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww this was such a sweet story. I love your writing. I wish you would write a second one shot about them "screwing like the cute little bunnies they are" They are sweet charecters and I loved their interactions.
person Anon
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is a beautiful story!!! love it!!!
ASOTA
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww! Even though it's not gonna be updated, that was one of the SWEETEST stories I've read! Made me all giggly and fan-girlish infact XD And "needy", but that goes without saying :P lol Thanks again for the awesome writing! You reeeally should get something published! You'd be a best seller within an hour! lol
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I stalk. That was incredibly cute and unfortunately a very accurate portrayal of the hell highschool can be. but, a happy, fluffy ending, so yay!
person MibuWolf
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily* this is like my fifth time reading this story and everytime I do, I find little bits and pieces I'd missed the previous time through. I'm thinking I already reviewed for this story but I can't remember. Eh, what's an extra review or two. Oh yeah, I loved the little "sort of" sequel you did for the story. "Oops" was it? Yeah *sighs happily again*. Great world you created. Now I only need to find me one of them fallen angels. lol Great story, as usual.
person shiden
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know this is a oneshot
but id really love to read a part 2 or 3...
its great!
person MibuWolf
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet and beautiful. It sort of made me tear up... okay, it DID make me cry at the end. I loved it. Too bad it was only a one-shot because I'm sure you could have developed a whole Triligy of different stories to go along with the theme. Yeah... dominating Fallen Angel lovers searching throughout the world and beyond for their true mates. lol
Way to go!