rate_review Reviews

a great chapter again yopur description of the dragon was magnificent really

Meh likey. ;D

I really enjoyed this. And your writing style is what I also admire. *Feels inspired to write* I really hope that you update. ^^

I really like your story, please continue! ^^ I wonder whats going to happen to her now.

Fantastic - a sexy man-like dragon. I'm always up for some fair-maiden-in-dire-jeopardy, and your male character is very original!

I like it (and phew! that she didn't have to shag an actual full-on dragon).

Chapters 1-2: This is a wonderful and intriguing beginning to a romantic battle between two very unlike characters. It will be exciting to see who scores against whom in this battle of the sexes. I think Darque is well-equipped to take on the arrogance of the dragon. She’s sensible in not wanting to push his obviously hot temper over the edge, but she doesn’t let him make her into a doormat either. Probably that’s why she’d still alive. He finds her intriguing.

I wonder what that orb is for? And is he thinking about making little dragonettes with her? Hot, hot smut – done very well.

I hope you update soon with more of this fascinating tale.

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A small detail about your term, “less”.
I think you mean, “lest”. The definition of “lest” is ‘for fear that’. As in, …tiptoed lest the guard should hear her; …anxious lest he become ill.

http://www.answers.com/topic/lest

Always a fan of the mediaeval maiden/dragon scenario. Nice stuff so far, good characterization. I'll be curious to see where this goes.

Nice story.. the female may bare a Drake.. im sure of.. but who knows..

Is he a real dragon? Or will he take on a human form? I don't like to think of poor old Darque being dismembered and incinerated - not a major turn-on of mine LOL. I suspect you have other plans for her...

I really like your writing style and look forward to more of this. I'm not sure what to suggest re the paragraphs - I write in Word then save it again in txt format and it seems to just transfer the paragraphing over. I'm not really the person to ask about technical stuff though - it's usually trial and lots of error before anything works for me :-).

This is interesting...I like it.
I like how you have made Darque an outcast with a mind of her own.
I can't wait for your next chapter.
Oh and the lack of s-e-x did not hurt your chapter in the least.
Take your time and let the story build. To me that makes it all the more interesting when 'it' does happen.
Post more when you can...

BCM