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for The Dragon

by DanniGurl

person RckKami
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love your story. Hot and steamy matings are my fav. I wish I could write like that...Please keep writing more. ^_^
person Sonyasha
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is something. i got drawn in very easily and you have soo many people who read this *looks at hit counter* your story is a hit ^^ well i cant wait to read the next chapter. please update this story soon.
Thank You!!

Ja-Ne =^_^=
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Darque isn’t faring too well in her new ‘home’ as slave, housekeeper and general dogsbody. I think I’d stay on the Dragon’s good side too if my other option was Danthor. Being clawed to death during his orgasm would rank right down there with being Vlad the Impaler’s beloved. A disgusting possibility of being nailed in either case.

I do hope both ‘men’ are potty-trained.

I think Darque could be forgiven for wishing for an experience that, while not sterling while it was happening, remains as her only fond memory of another’s touch in her captivity. One sees why Stockholm Syndrome could work.

How did you decide on the Dragon’s name – Silas?

I know this is blasphemy, but the story is so compelling, I’m not even missing the sex. This is really exciting. I’ll impatiently wait until I can find out if Silas survives (I’ve got a hunch he does…) and how permanently injured he is. I do hope he makes a complete recovery. If he needs Darque for some tender care in the meantime, that should help her cause, shouldn’t it?

Terrific writing and fascinating story. I love this!

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Small item: check out the definitions for prone and supine. Prone is horizontally ONLY face down. Supine is face up. Everyone gets that wrong.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg love it! can't wait to see more
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm so glad you updated! Congrates to a third successful chapter! :D I can't wait to see what happens between the two ether. Wonder what they'll have in store for us next? :D
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wait, HE HAS A BABY?! XD Shocking, so does that mean he already had a lover?
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, Silas' baby dragon egg is a great addition to the mix. Now she has committed herself to staying and helping to raise the babe.

Great imagination and vivid writing again, Darque. I love it!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving this story. I hope you continue it.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good.
I'm enjoying how your story is unfolding and I think the idea of the egg is ingenious.
Keep up the good work...

BCM
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS GREAT UPDATE SOON!!!!!1