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I'm really enjoying this!! And you don't have to worry about busting out a lot of sex! I love the way that you are doing this! It has just the right amount of everything! I can't wait until your next installment!! Thanks sooo much for writing!

Veryvery intriguing. =X I like it! Danthor appeals to me, for some reason. He's neat. I wouldn't have really expected him to be that concerned for Silas; he had the perfect opportunity for Darque but he left her alone to heal the dragon instead. This delights me. =3

Continue soon please and thanks. =3

Hey there, I've just caught up with you wonderful story.
I love dragons and must tell you that your story is great.
You write very well including the HMS.

that cliff hanger was so mean!!! but great Up date soon please!

You are evil. Leaving a cliffy like that is just mean. So now I demand to know what happens. What happens between Danthor and Darque? He cannot (and I stress CANNOT!) harm her. Plus why has the king summoned Silas? Ok enough of my meltdown.

That chapter was wonderful. I really liked how he asked her ‘“What sort of human are you?”’. It makes it seem that he is starting to change his opinion of her. And it was sweet how he finally let her take a bath. She was probably getting pretty smelly.

One quick question: Who’s the Mommy? If Silas is going to be a Daddy, there has to be a Mommy. Or at least an egg donor.

Keep up the wonderful writing and post when you can.
Oh, and apology accepted. I understand life happens. I hope you feel better.

BCM

Oh, a dragon-man story. There aren't enough of those. I like your writing style. Silas is fascinating, and after reading ch. 4 I see we're getting deeper into the plot. You have me in suspense. Looking forward to reading the next ch. and seeing what the king wants. I can only imagine. ;)

Cool I found it again. I remember reading the first chapter of this story but then I lost track of it. I am so glade to see so many more chapters to read. Hope you write more and fast. I sort of hope the wolf-man dose not do anything to her though. He and the dragon seem to have a friend thing together and that would make a dire twist I would think.

Oh wow, I can't wait till the next chapter, you have me so excited to see what happens next. Your are true writer with huge cliff hangers. XD I really am wondering about all those questions, can't wait. X3

Chapter 4: I’m glad Silas is feeling better and is completely healed. (It wouldn’t do to have the main character become a ghost dragon.) He’s showing a – slightly – softer side to her in response to her care for him? At least she gets to bathe.

Hmmm, with that treatment I think I’d tell him anything he wanted to know. And I’d recite the Gettysburg Address, sing the Hallelujah Chorus and yodel if he would only keep up that sexy ‘torture’.

Ah, you use ‘supine’ instead of prone for horizontal face-up. That is my biggest pet peeve in the entire literary world. THANK YOU for using the correct word. I’m singing another round of the Hallelujah Chorus just for that.

Yikes! Silas ups and leaves in the middle of THAT? This king person must be pretty important. A relative? King of what? And I do hope Darque isn’t going to be taken up where Silas left off with Danthor in the studly role. He really needs to find a she-wolf.

Great job on this chapter. I’m enjoying this story tremendously!

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If you don’t mind the suggestions:
“see if perhaps it lie broken” – should be ‘lay’
“He started at her calculatingly” – I think you meant ‘stared’?
“no where close” – nowhere is one word

Marvellously hot, sexy chapter - and even some plot thrown in. And he isn't going to eat her - yay! (Well, not that kind of eating anyway...)

I don't normally fancy dragons but your Danthor might just change my mind.

So what does the King want? Hope you are fully recovered and able to give us more of this fab writing and smut soon xx.