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for The Dragon

by DanniGurl

schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an information-packed chapter. Fascinating and compelling as ever (and great to have this before I expected it as well).

Danthor is an interesting character; I liked how he wasn't too hard on Darque (OK, except in *that* sense).

This is such an unusual and hot story; I wish you all the best with your college transfer and hope you can update soon.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: This egg is so intriguing. Perhaps a female? I wonder how that will work into the story?

Eek! She’s run away again? That is such a scary thing for her to do. But what a reward. All night, huh? That Darque just keeps getting lucky.

Your story is getting more convoluted and intensely fascinating. Several new players have emerged. I wonder if the original sorcerer is still alive? His idea certainly backfired.

Hot smut with a new lover. One wonders also who lives inside Darque? The king? Their names are the same, you said?

Anyway, I’m glad Silas is back. Darque may not be, however, and Danthor might come in for some anger as well. If she’s leaving the forest in the next chapter, where will she go, and who will go with her?

Wonderful story, wonderful writing.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I am so glad I found it agian, I had forgotten how good it was. I hope you will update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope the king has something really nasty happen to him. Nasty in a bad way of course. :)
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No worries, dear, we're patient. ^^ Glad it hasn't been forgotten, though!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O...M...G!! >< *clings onto you* I thought you had died!! I was so sad for a while that you would be one of those authors who leaves a good story unfinished and dried out to be eaten by dragons! TwT Even though this isn't an update you've brightened up my day to know your still here for us. Thank you!!! X3
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am just glad to know there will be more!!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet! the east coast welcomes you and your amazing fantastical mind!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooo cliff hanger!!! but most happiness on the new chapter. danthor is not nearly as evil as previously thought...
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the chapter! IT was very good and has made the story even more intrigueing! Can't wait for the next chapter
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darque - Will you be updating this story? If you've decided to abandon it, could you put a note in the summary page so we readers can know not to keep checking back?

I would really like to read more and I do hope you plan to continue. The story is unique and fascinating, and you write very well.

I'll keep my fingers crossed that you continue your lovely story soon.