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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cute funny chapter. I liked seeing Drakk stand up to Darkness for Feles. Drakk has witnessed so many of Darkness' misdeeds that he should truly understand how Feles feels. Maybe at some point they will follow the old man's suggestion and all go to bed together. (I have such a dirty mind!)
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was starting to wonder what Drakk had been up to.
Chap 55 & 56 great job.
Chap 55 & 56 great job.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Darkness is a great story. My favorite part is the dialogue. Always so hilarious. I am very happy with how things are turning out. I had to laugh at the scene in the tavern when Keylyn couldn't resist taking some of the bread and honey. I was sure that it was a trap. I hope Drakk and Feles can find some happiness as well. Poor Feles is like an abused stray cat. Everybody has treated him so badly. I am looking forward to the rest of the story.
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally I've caught up! I'm excited for Drakk to be in the story more.
(I sent you an email with my reply Gslinger.)
(I sent you an email with my reply Gslinger.)
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear Cloeknz, are you really serious, about to wanting to be a beta for me... I am desperate for help, because I am a lousy Editor, my spelling sucks and what's worse I leave words out and it drives me crazy... I have a bad feeling everybody thinks on I don't make an effort to edit my mistakes, but honestly I do...I am not very good at it! I want someone to check my spelling and grammar, as make sure I don't miss connecting word. Also I want someone to make comments on particular scenarios and plot development that don't make since to them or seem weak and distract from the story. I will honestly consider every one of your suggestions in this case, but I might only refuse them if I feel they distract from the mood I am trying to create. But all your grammar, missing words, and spelling correction will be religiously followed no matter what! Still interested in taking me on and my many flaws, contact me to talk about it or even if you change your mind:
spiderblue@verizon.net
spiderblue@verizon.net
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm currently on chapter 36 and enjoying your story and the life of poor Keylyn.
If you still need a beta I's be happy to help you out.
If you still need a beta I's be happy to help you out.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Darkness is finally getting better.
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH! really a excelent reunion. with out enty promese but with exposition of the emotion.
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. The last chapter was touching. I'm looking forward to a bit of romance as well as kink ;)
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"So that’s what they did". Didn't think I would ever read those words from your "pen".
It is uncharacteristic of your work to have such a sentence. I am sending you
good happy karma points to give you a boost. I can tell by this chap you need a lift.
Best wishes for the future. This is still my #1 fav fic. I'm a big fan.
--aspen
It is uncharacteristic of your work to have such a sentence. I am sending you
good happy karma points to give you a boost. I can tell by this chap you need a lift.
Best wishes for the future. This is still my #1 fav fic. I'm a big fan.
--aspen