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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapters. Feles is such a sweetheart especially after being treated so badly by everyone. i am glad that he found it in his heart to forgive lord Darkness and to rescue him from the robbers. The dialogue is great as usual. I hope Keylyn will be able to survive until they find him. Maybe he will be able to save himself if he can get in touch with his powers. The story is going great. Very exciting. I am eager to find out what will happen to sweet little Keylyn.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:o hehe i started reading this not too long ago maybe last week or something but ^^ i love it all really and hope that your RL gets better.
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your note. I hope that soon your life can be organize and take right course. If possible that you get a new and better paid work. Your story is worthwhile to wait. So I will wait. Please do not leave unfinished. Good luck
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good luck! I hope that you life make more sance and your can earn more money. Your tale is worth it to wait. I can wait but please continue
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and i can't wait for more. keep them coming please!!!!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Feles and Drakk did have fun. Very nice love scenes for them. I hope this adventure goes okay for Feles. I hope Key gets rescued before they torture him too much. Hopefully his growing magic skills will be able to help him out. I am very happy about Feles and Drakk. They are so good for each other. I had to laugh at Darkness's promise to "try" to not lay a single finger on Feles. At least he is honest. Maybe Keylyn will find out some more about his background on this adventure. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, i'm wondering if you'll end the story here. since they are all getting along. it would be a good place to stop.
not saying i want you to stop because i don't, great job as always.
not saying i want you to stop because i don't, great job as always.
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At first when i saw this I read it and got confused and decided that it's not good but I was wrong. I truly truly love this story. There's so much evil and..... sex. Good job on creating it. Continue it!
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hihi, the old man is really funny...
It took me three days to read your story, and I can`t wait to read more!!!
It`s one of the best fantasy storys I`have ever read.
I love darkness so much,that evil bastard...:)and I`m so excited about this El elf,I bet he will not rest to
take Keylyn away.So I hope Darkness will recognize his love for Key before it`s to late.
I would also love to read more about Drakk,because he`s hot as hell.
Please continue soon, Jules
It took me three days to read your story, and I can`t wait to read more!!!
It`s one of the best fantasy storys I`have ever read.
I love darkness so much,that evil bastard...:)and I`m so excited about this El elf,I bet he will not rest to
take Keylyn away.So I hope Darkness will recognize his love for Key before it`s to late.
I would also love to read more about Drakk,because he`s hot as hell.
Please continue soon, Jules
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. Funny and congruent