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chap 32.

wow. he grew that much over 2 chapters. I wonder what's keeping darkness away for so long... surely he'd want Key right.... hmmm well~

and I wonder. I have a feeling that, despite slowly gaining power over his own magic.... somehow, i feel that... key's not gonna leave darkness? hmmm~

Hi there,

Just finished reading your story, I hope to see an update soon. I'm so curious as to what will happen and if they can defeat the big bad vampire wizard elf (interesting combination by the way)

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! I like Keilyn's slight descent into madness. I really want the evil monster to get what he deserves and then some. I am very happy to a new chapter to this story as it was one of the first original fictions I've ever read and I desperately hope for a quick update because this is turning out to be one of the best endings ever.

Please update soon!!

Oh now I am horribly depressed. How could all these horrible things happen to sweet Keylyn? Why? I was hoping that he would be rescued before things got so bad that he was on the verge of insanity. I wonder if Key will ever be able to be happy again. WAAH. Gslinger you have to update soon.

I can't bear to think of Key in such a bad situation. It is so sad.

Thanks for the new chapter Gslinger. Let the rescue begin They certainly have a lot of work ahead of them. I just hope Keylyn and Feles and Drakk and Seer Reign will come out safe and sound at the end. At least there is hope in the air. They have a better chance with the dwarves helping them. The main hope is that the evil elf lord will not kill Key since he wants to use his power. I admire the dwarf queen for being ready to go into battle so soon after giving birth. I think Darkness and Little Bud are so cute together, they will definitely be allies in the future if they all make it out okay. I have had so much fun reading this story. I am sad that it will be ending soon.

Gslinger! Update please!! I can't go for too long without hearing from my beloved Lord Darkness!

chap 28.

key's suffering from a case of Stockholm syndrome isn't he.
better be thanking his lucky stars darkness fell asleep.

chap 29.

Key is just so confused isn't he?
I'm a bit confused too... At first, it seemed like Key was enjoying it... then later, it seemed as thou Key wasn't liking it at all. as thou he was being forced to feel pleasure...

hmmmmmmmm~

chap 24.

i really like how you describe food.
good thing i'm eating my lunch while reading this now ^___^

and I can only wonder what lies in the future for Key..... having to obey every order... scary....