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for Darkness

by RJaneyP

person Anon
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good look forward to the next chapter.
person Bastian
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chapter. I hope this ritual doesn't involve actually killing the elf. That wouldn't be too good. Other than that I look forward to more of your updates!
person JudeCain
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should enabled the anonymous reviews too, I'm sure you would have more feedback like that ^^
Anyways, I like your story so far, it's well written, the characters & the plot are good!
I can't wait to se what the little prince will do & I hope he won't give up too soon
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heya!
i have been waiting for you to update and was soo happy when you finaly did
and then when i saw you had no reviews i felt horrible because this is a great story and i cant wait for more and im sure there are others that feel the same so update soon and i cant wait to see what happens
love and cookies
Raven
person Bastian
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you updated...I was wondering how he would react if he found out it wasn't a tail. Good chappy hope you update again soon.