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for Darkness

by RJaneyP

person Saminada
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't be ant happier right now!!
Another update so soon!! that's great!

And about ur G... I've not seen any word that I didn't recognized yet!
With me, as long as I can understand what ur write without having to try and figure out what a certain word is, I really don't mind simple mistakes! ^^

Anyways, I like the story and I can't wait for more! *hugs*
person aisha
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome chapter!!! I really am in love with this story, all the characters are great and I can't wait to read more. And I definitely can't wait until darkness has his little ritual. I wonder what shall happen to Keylyn
person aisha
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh! more more! I must have more!!
person shadow
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol sugar the horny horse-elf
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story hope 2 c more soon
person shadow
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like Sugar... i have a horse and he's huge and lazy
person shadow
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
on another note, you'd probably get more reviews if you also put this in the slash section
person Ryan83
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome!..it matches my taste perfectly...keep up the good work!..please continue, it'll be such a waste to leave this piece of art uncompleted.
anyways, that bad boy must be punished severely for trying to escape..i hope he got caught very soon XD
I just can't wait for that boy to be taken by the sexy master
I'll be waiting for your next update ;)
person shadow
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so mysterious!!! i kinda hope he gets to escape...only to be caught again of course
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo....I like it! Please write more~! *can't wait for the next chapter[s]*