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for Darkness

by RJaneyP

person Saminada
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update!!
Now I can't wait to see that ritual Darkness so want to do!...
I hope it wont be to bad for Keylyn! >___<

Plz update again soon!
I want mooore!!! *grins*
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving it
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i just read all your comments and even though i just commented they inspired me to comment again so here goes
im enjoying this story so much and u r a great writer dont listen to the spelling nazi's and have them get u down about your story write what u feel cause this is a great story
(i hope this inspired you as your comment inspired me)
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far and look forward to an update. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you just need a second pair of eyes to look over your chapters for common errors, I would be more that happy to help. I absolutely love this story and I've been following it since day one. Damn, I wish gaming was even half as interesting as this! Can't wait to see what happens next.
person aisha
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you finally updated!! Another AWESOME chapter! Oh! I can't wait for the ceremony!
person aisha
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Muwahahaha! awesomely evil chapter! I love it! More must have more!
person Joshua
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really have talent for writing. Usually it takes me a while to get interested but as soon as I started reading this, it caught me right away! I can't wait to see what happens! keep up the good work!
person shadow
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor keylyn nothing ever goes his way
person Saminada
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! He's in deep shit again!! >_<
Are things going to get better for him soon?? I hope so! Poor little elf! *hugs*

Plz update again soon! I can't wait for more!!!