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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Keylyn....will Darkness ever be nice to him? I would like him to...i would be intersting.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sure like ur story!! ^^
I think it's really good and I read it immediately when I see u post a new update! ^^
So thanks alot for the story and btw, I really can't wait to see how things will turn out for ur little guy!^^
I think it's really good and I read it immediately when I see u post a new update! ^^
So thanks alot for the story and btw, I really can't wait to see how things will turn out for ur little guy!^^
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really do like this story and like where you are going with it. I was hoping the Dark lord would be able to tell that he tried to take his elf. Cabot deserves punishment. Can't wait to see what happens next so please do update soon. It has been too long since chapter 26. Thank you.
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is fantastic. The few twist and turns are great and I eagerly await each chapter. Keep up the good work!!!
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 25
Hi Gslinger,
Did I overlook reviewing your story? *slaps self* I am reading it and enjoying your fic very much. This last chapter was especially interesting with some info on Darkness' background. He was held captive by elves, hah? Interesting plot twist. I liked the character developement on Gabot and the Demon as well.
This story made me go and look at your other staff. Hero Worship is very good and I have the image of Cloud inside the golden cage etched on the backs of my eyelids right now, hehe!
Happy Xmas (or other) :D
Hi Gslinger,
Did I overlook reviewing your story? *slaps self* I am reading it and enjoying your fic very much. This last chapter was especially interesting with some info on Darkness' background. He was held captive by elves, hah? Interesting plot twist. I liked the character developement on Gabot and the Demon as well.
This story made me go and look at your other staff. Hero Worship is very good and I have the image of Cloud inside the golden cage etched on the backs of my eyelids right now, hehe!
Happy Xmas (or other) :D
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24 - Haha. Now that it's been a couple of days I forgot what I wanted to say about this chappie. Oh well.
BUT it is SO obvious that nasty Cabot is going to jump poor Key.
That nasty Cabot. I hope Darkness finds out and kills him.
BUT it is SO obvious that nasty Cabot is going to jump poor Key.
That nasty Cabot. I hope Darkness finds out and kills him.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 23 - Oh...my...god. That ritual thing was so incredibly hot. So incredibly hot.
I absolutely love this story. It's so fucking wonderful. And dark and I love Seer'Reign. He's so perfect. I love him. Such a bastard. I love my tops as bastards.
Anyways, I wasn't going to read this story at first because of all the random spelling/grammar mistakes. But I'm REALLY glad I did. I'm sure you heard this before, and no offense, but you could really use a beta. I read once where you were asking how much they cost, they're free. For example, I could be your beta. But I'm already someone else's beta and I write my own story. So, I could only beta your new chapters. Not your old ones. Because you have too many. Rofl.
Anyways, if you want me to beta your new chapters email me at: mavinsavvy@yahoo.com
If you don't want me to, that's fine.
I'm a big girl.
I can handle it. *sniff*
Haha. Well, update soon.
I absolutely love this story. It's so fucking wonderful. And dark and I love Seer'Reign. He's so perfect. I love him. Such a bastard. I love my tops as bastards.
Anyways, I wasn't going to read this story at first because of all the random spelling/grammar mistakes. But I'm REALLY glad I did. I'm sure you heard this before, and no offense, but you could really use a beta. I read once where you were asking how much they cost, they're free. For example, I could be your beta. But I'm already someone else's beta and I write my own story. So, I could only beta your new chapters. Not your old ones. Because you have too many. Rofl.
Anyways, if you want me to beta your new chapters email me at: mavinsavvy@yahoo.com
If you don't want me to, that's fine.
I'm a big girl.
I can handle it. *sniff*
Haha. Well, update soon.
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as per usual u r a genius
i give u big cookies and the bribe of more cookies if u update soon :)
i give u big cookies and the bribe of more cookies if u update soon :)
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intreeging, now i realy want to know just what darkness get's up to when he isn't molesting the poor little elf!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! finally! Now will Key still be himself or an obedient servant? We shall see! awesome story!