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for Darkness

by RJaneyP

schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Key! ^.^ He toasted those lizards! The dirtiness of them....Excellent update!
person RJaneyP
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Aspen for the lovely review, I tried to post these two chapters together , because they where kind of a set... it takes me longer to get chapters posted, because I am lousy editor,Sob! No beta wants me,:) make that with Upper case "L" in lousy.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 34 and 35 were great. Always wanting more.
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Little Key, what have you gotten yourself into now?
person Saminada
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOOOOVED the update!! :D

That crazy Elf Vampire better not hurt little Key!! grr

And lets hope that Dresden isn't faking it! That would be.... >__< I wonder what he wants? Hopefully he's not the Vampire Elf's spy or something! Key needs to watch his back at all times!! >>

Oh well, I can't wait to read more and see what happens next! XD :D

Thanks alot for the update!
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very long prehensile demon cock :)) How long was it I wonder... and how the hell does the demon walk with it? Does he fold it or what lol... cute v cute... Am looking forward for a threesome... Although with such a cock on the demon, what I have in mind would be complicated... =)) Going back to reading now... Hugs, SH
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow Keylyn is turning into a force to be reckoned with. i am rooting for him to kick darkness's ass and regain his freedom!
person Saminada
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Darkness' been gone for a long while now! O___O

I wonder if he will find Keylyn even more beautiful when he sees him again?? 'cause he sure does sound beautiful! XD :D

Anyways, I wonder what Dresden will become to Keylyn? A friend?...

Man, Thaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnks alot for the update!! :D XDD

I can't wait for more! *hugs*



person Saminada
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O____O Oh my! Darkness' being pretty 'daring' with his poor little Elf! ;; LOL

Keylyn seams a bit torn between what He wants and what his body wants! LOL >>
Poor guy! Darkness is humiliating him so much! T__T I wonder what he will do now??

Anyways, thanks alot for the update! I loved it! *hugs*
I can't wait to read more of those two! ehe :D
person RJaneyP
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah... Thanks Raven. I needed that review so very badly! The noble Raven is always my favorite intelligent Bird and a totem of spiritual power and humor. Thank you again for taking time to review I really appreciate it. Love, G

PS I actually have another Chapter ready, but my beta suddenly went missing, and the chapter is in limbo... if I don't hear from her soon... I am going to post it anyway, and that means I guess I'll have to go Beta Hunting in the near future.

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