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for Darkness

by RJaneyP

person animekid
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dammit I love this story!

At first I was like IDK it's non con derp, but it grew on me like a fungus.

All the characters are awesome, the dwarfs are cool, and I laughed my ass off at the Queen slapping Darkness' ass. Man oh man is it bad that I hope it does turn into an orgy later on with those four?

Fuck is Key going to end up like a mini Darkness?

Don't drop this story; please.
person animekid
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read 30 chapters of this. I kinda like the wizard Darkness, Key, Drakk, well everyone. I'm tripping out from reading too much...... But its a good story.
person kylee123
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the dwarf queen. She is so sharp. I Darkness can't get any of his thoughts past her. I think Lord Darkness should have her around permanently so she can keep him on his toes. I hope we get the next chapter soon.
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
c.45

So Key finally decides to take his life?
Honestly.... What is that boy thinking... 1st, while Darkness was away, he studies his magick so intently so as to escape. Then, with the captain, he tries to seduce, along with that other girl. But nothing fruitful comes out of it. The Captain is dead, and the girl too I guess. Darkness wouldnt let either of them live.
Which comes to the point of HOW darkness spies on Key, till he knows all these details...

Darkness really is merciless, onto someone I though he somewhat- cared for, or love.
Beating Key up like that! While he has only barely recovered! Heartless!

*Reads on*
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
c. 47.

What? WHAT?! Dresden never existed?! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! how come soneone so solid be not real?! NOT REAL!?
and why why why did Drakk save him.... whhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyy..... Drakk should've known only more horrible things awaited Key.... and again, barely healed, Drakness messes up with Key's head again... man....

* reads on *
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
c.48

He followed that THING?! how could he have followed that thing?! Keeeeeeeeeeey!!! *shakes him* Are you some sort of stupid?! argh....
then again........ he had been recently traumatized and bullied and all.... so I guess he's pardoned.
person kylee
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi Gslinger. The new chapter did not show up.
person Vamp Fangirl
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Something weird with the latest chapter.Vamp
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
c. 38....

Was darkness being there really a dream? can't be right?
but why would be come when Key wasn't in the castle but at some inn somewhere.... when he had all the time back then to just drop by and bang him, and i was under the impression darkness didn't want to hurt key anymore... and.... huh.... hmmmm...
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
c. 43.

This Dresden is..... fishy. I have a feeling darkness has a link somewhat with him, to see through his eyes. or something? I don't know... just something. Something that we don't know yet but will be of great importance or power. Be careful of Dresden. You have been warned Key.

And Key had redeemed himself in my eyes. Helping his newly-made-friend with his magic. I'm glad he did that~ ^^

Now, I hope they get back to the castle quickly without much incident. @@