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Hey! Just wondering when to expect the next chapter. I've been checking stories that are not finished that I think should be. Would really like to see how Naru handles his situation. Also, would like more details into the Darra and exactly what role they play in their society. It has to be more that the ability to produce and have strong healthy children. Do Darra produce males only or can they produce females as well. I AM SOOOO INTO MPREG.

Ciao!!

More more!!! *hehehe* come on update!
what happens next?
and you have that weird QnA section lol! It's the 1st time I've read something here that had something like that~ XD
cute~ ;3

but gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh.. how old is that commander (I cant spell his name =X)
just how many years older is he to Naru?
*shivers* poor Naru... the 1st time's gonna be painful... hell it will be!
that moron better prep him properly unless he wants red bedsheets! it better be on a bed!
*falls* what am i thinking.... gaaaaaah

but nice.. good going~
a good setting, and set up to have a sensible male preg story, me likey.
you get thumbs up ^_^ yay~

update yea!!! ok?
*hugs*

yay! thanks for the update and the fanfic scene.

An update! Thank the fanfic gods! I'm surprised at where the story headed in this chapter, so off I go to the next! Great job!

Hmm, it's too bad the bonus chapter isn't part of the real story, since Naru seems more in character to me than in the previous "real" chapter. I hungrily await more :)

Keep those chapters coming girl. I feel, however, that Naru needs to be a little bit more resistant to Eulovanic. I would fight tooth and nail if some arrogant *sshole says hes going to get children on me. I mean, geez!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ciao!!

love this story its great

Yeah you updated, took aaaages but you update. I love Naru, hope he doesn't turn all soft, Eulovenic (hope i spelled it right) deserves someone who gives him as good as he gets. Ok I would looove to write you a long review but I can't think of anyhting else to write except that this story is brilliantly writen, that I wish there were more chapters and that I added it to my faveourites. Please carry on. THank you!

Story was getting interesting. How soon will the next chapter be up?

Is this story going to be continued? Or is it dead?