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for Twilight of Ivory

by Isorayau

schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your compliment on my tenacity in regards to your story.

Looks like Naru is keeping to his plan of escaping. If he is successful......god, will Eulovanic be pissed!

Will keep this review short as I'm a huntin' and a peckin' due to two broken fingers on my right hand and am using my left to type. Its a bitch.

Don't be long with the next chapter.
person L.S.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha loved the chapter!! and the author's note was really funny :) Take your time!! I loved the chapter!!
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like!!! Must read more.
person miles
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update ! It's been SO long !
I really love your story so please don't make me wait like that... ^^
I think he's going to fall for his beautiful lord...
person Jetfire
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story, even if you do take ages to update. However its a great update so def worth it. I'm so happy
person JtheChosen1
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent story!
person cfweber1b
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. Love Naru and was very glad to see that maybe he will be treated like a treasure.Eulovanic listens I hope and befriends Naru. Yay Prith for making Eulo listen
person green
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thought you might be dead. I know you displayed Naru as a person who doesn't hold grudges but this compliance was a bit quick. But the scene with E. was funny.
person green
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to mention this earlier. Won't E. get suspicious of this ready to bond attitude? You make it seem as if Prith is part of the plan. Feeding E.(Why did you have to give him such a hard name?) sweet words that Naru later makes happen.
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, its me again. I really, really would like to see another chapter of Twilight of Ivory. Its been three months since the last chapter and I had hoped that there would have been at least a couple of more chapers by now. Is everything okay with you? Know there could be a million and one things going on with your life that prevents you from writing. But I will be patient and keep checking for an update. Take care.