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for Twilight of Ivory

by Isorayau

person green
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Last time my review was two words. I will do better this time. I hope you tell the history between the two races. I do like this story. Very few mpreg stories are original. I am sure the daire and the lord's conversations will be hilarious, I look forward to them. Even among the darra, the child bearing ones are rare? I hope Lord E. shows his own mentality. I look forward to the next chapter. Are these people magick capabale?
person Sekre
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I seriously adore you. There definitely isn't enough fantasy/slash/romance/mpreg around here. Can't wait to read more.
person claire
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving this story, hope you continue it soon
person cricri
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story....please continue
Call me a freak, but I'm addicted to mpreg themes
person tie me up. tie me down.
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story and I really like it. I hope to see some more soon.
person Cloud
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it can't wait for you to update.

Keep up the good work
person myoregon
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't start reading a story until there are a few chapters already completed. Most of the time, the authors never complete the stories and I hate getting addicted to them and then never being able to finish them. Your story, or at least your summary, intrigued me. An I wasn't disappointed. That was a great first chapter and I hope you will continue it.
person green
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good job
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story i hope you post soon.
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intrigueing cant wait to see where u take us