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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start!Waiting for more!
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"If only he'd made it so that the darra could use the same magic to protect themselves, because then Naru wouldn't be in this predicament. "
Here! Here! I WHOLE HEARTEDLY agree....
Here! Here! I WHOLE HEARTEDLY agree....
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, LOVE THIS. XD I think the plot sounds awesome, and I love Mpregs so this is just my thing. (Along with N/C)
Can't wait for more chapters. ;D
Can't wait for more chapters. ;D
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy you updated and that you have given more backstory to this. I can't wait for the next chapter. I don't remember seeing anything really wrong about the grammer or anything like that. All in all it was nice to read and it has left me wanting more. Please update soon!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Your really good at leaving us wanting more. I really like the stories that start out as a love/hate relationship too. So will this end up being a love story in the end? Will they grow to love and respect each other? Will they both be able to teach each other the things that the other lacks? Never mind, don't answer that. I am rather enjoying the suspense of not know where you'll take the story. Please though, update soon.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay another chappie i like this story :D
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story so far, I'm looking forward to reading more of it!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more
the added history background is great
the added history background is great
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting, I can't wait to see what you can to with this little plot line. Your set up to this point has been very good.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the second chapter, and I am extremely excited for more. :)
The story is wonderfully written, and very interesting. I like how you give information on the characters instead of just throwing them together and having them make babies. xD
But yeah, I read your author's note on the second chapter. I can agree with what you said. Can't have our daire being too girly, and angst is always good; as long as you don't milk it for TOO long. ;)
Keep up the good work. *excited*
The story is wonderfully written, and very interesting. I like how you give information on the characters instead of just throwing them together and having them make babies. xD
But yeah, I read your author's note on the second chapter. I can agree with what you said. Can't have our daire being too girly, and angst is always good; as long as you don't milk it for TOO long. ;)
Keep up the good work. *excited*