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for Twilight of Ivory

by Isorayau

person reader
schedule June 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I need more of this story
person reader
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story and it's really good. I wanna read more. I hope you finish writing this story. I wanna know what happens. Don't give on this story. It's really good please.
person RitsuO3O
schedule July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
D: not finished.....never will be...
person Pagan
schedule June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How disappointing. After a wonderful beginning, filled with characters that were likeable and realistic, and a story line that promised good things, to find another abandoned story. I usually try to only read the ones that say complete, but the summary drew me in. I'm not rating this story. I only rate completed stories.
person reader
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
like this is there more even if its not posted here.
person miles
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What happened to you ?! Your story was so great... :(
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really really like this story, and i really hope that it doesnt stop hear and that you will upload more soon...i really really hope that you will finish this great story soon!!!!
person Asialisek
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I Hooooope you haven't given up on this story. SO refreshing, the characters are wonderful, your style flows and pulls the reader in - oh! But the characters are really great!!!

Pease please update soon. Tug at those little muses, we beg of it.
:)

It really is a great story, and looking forward to all of this unwinding, the angst, the ups and downs- SO much to look forward too.


J
person Asialisek
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I just looked at my last review, and pretty much almost said the same thing. The feelings are stroooong. :D

I've waited longer for authors to update - and you know what? When the story is amazing and the writing is amazing, then it's worth it.

It's worth it.

I hope you continue. I really do.
Above par story tellers are rare enough as it is, and us "non-writers" (and writers alike) just live to praise and prod those authors we follow.

:)
Cheers,

J
person kissedbymidnight
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have written a really good story so far^_^ You have a good style and I like all of your descriptions. You don’t over do them, but I have a good sense of what people look like and where Naru is. I also like how Naru is cunning and sneaky, but also very friendly and personable. I have grown rather attached to him and I hope he ends up very happy. I kind of hope he eventually grows to like Eulovanic though, and I mean truly like him. I read Rift also and one things that made the story seem sad to me was that the humans always just seemed to settle. They wouldn’t choose to be with their wolf and didn’t have that all consuming, full-blown happy love that I really like to see in stories. Obviously, it would take time for affection to build, but I think it’s possible with them. I guess I will just have to wait and see^_^Also, I was hoping you could e-mail me at kissedbymidnight@gmail.com when you add another chapter, since this site doesn’t do story alerts. Thank you and I can’t wait to see what happens next!