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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I literally LOL'ed at the last part.
Poor suichi, he hasn't been laid in ages!
Bu wow, has he got self control.
Yataro is a werecat?! WHOA!
But Kyo was so cute, even though it sadden's me he won't talk to Yataro.
'Pirates of the Contemporary' = GREAT CHAP
I can't wait for the next xD
And I gotta say, Kumiko is slowly becoming my god damn favourtie character.
How cool is she? hahas
Poor suichi, he hasn't been laid in ages!
Bu wow, has he got self control.
Yataro is a werecat?! WHOA!
But Kyo was so cute, even though it sadden's me he won't talk to Yataro.
'Pirates of the Contemporary' = GREAT CHAP
I can't wait for the next xD
And I gotta say, Kumiko is slowly becoming my god damn favourtie character.
How cool is she? hahas
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy am I glad I still check this story on a weekly basis!!
Firstly, I'M GLAD YOU'RE BACK!!
Secondly, oh my gosh *fan girl mode* how cute is Yataro when he yelled at kumiko?!?!
I love Kumiko too though, god she's the BOMB!
I really like erm, their uh disguises *LOLS*
But WOW! PIRATES?!
Jesus woman, anymore surprises like that and I might just have a heart attack =]
Eichi is soooo sweet btw~
love it and anticipating MORE!!~ xD
I hope everything's well and I send my regards. Take care. ^^
Firstly, I'M GLAD YOU'RE BACK!!
Secondly, oh my gosh *fan girl mode* how cute is Yataro when he yelled at kumiko?!?!
I love Kumiko too though, god she's the BOMB!
I really like erm, their uh disguises *LOLS*
But WOW! PIRATES?!
Jesus woman, anymore surprises like that and I might just have a heart attack =]
Eichi is soooo sweet btw~
love it and anticipating MORE!!~ xD
I hope everything's well and I send my regards. Take care. ^^
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the long chapter. It was great plot and character movement. Though I must admit, I keep getting the characters confused (but I think that's just me). one small critique--as you write more action, you tend to forget many of the descriptions, especially of characters. Just watch for that. Great overall.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa!!! I was so happy with the relationship between Gen-chan and Shane. I love you. (x_x)
On the other hand...
Poor Toya!
That bitch. I really hope Suichi gets him back.
The story is going in a whole new direction! Is he/are they really going to Asia? *excited*
And Suichi's mother; I was so shocked! You sure know how to write a good story, with all the turns and surprises.
Thank you very much for the chapter. :)
On the other hand...
Poor Toya!
That bitch. I really hope Suichi gets him back.
The story is going in a whole new direction! Is he/are they really going to Asia? *excited*
And Suichi's mother; I was so shocked! You sure know how to write a good story, with all the turns and surprises.
Thank you very much for the chapter. :)
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!
Toya!! Please be okay!
Oh, I hate that woman.
I hope Suichi does save Toya in time!
and wow, so Suichi isn't the only half blood...
I didn't expect his mother to not be human!!
Yet, it does make sense if I think about it...
Thanks for the chapter ^^ you update REALLY fast xD
Toya!! Please be okay!
Oh, I hate that woman.
I hope Suichi does save Toya in time!
and wow, so Suichi isn't the only half blood...
I didn't expect his mother to not be human!!
Yet, it does make sense if I think about it...
Thanks for the chapter ^^ you update REALLY fast xD
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAHH! not another one!?
hehe ah wells, cliffies keep me hooked.
That ...girl (If i can call her that, 'crazy woman/vampire' sounds more appropriate ^_^) was SCARY!
Poor Kaito, I hope he get's his money worth for it at least... best thing out of a bad situation.
But god! Toya was soooo sexy~ *insert major drooling smiley emoticon*
And Yataro is extremely cute! x] [quote: “Kyo-kun…I think there’s something wrong with my arm.”]
Not much to say about Shane, other than I never want to cross him...
Oh! and with the special thanks, thank YOU for providing such a great story xD
hehe ah wells, cliffies keep me hooked.
That ...girl (If i can call her that, 'crazy woman/vampire' sounds more appropriate ^_^) was SCARY!
Poor Kaito, I hope he get's his money worth for it at least... best thing out of a bad situation.
But god! Toya was soooo sexy~ *insert major drooling smiley emoticon*
And Yataro is extremely cute! x] [quote: “Kyo-kun…I think there’s something wrong with my arm.”]
Not much to say about Shane, other than I never want to cross him...
Oh! and with the special thanks, thank YOU for providing such a great story xD
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember if I've reviewed lately (or at all) but I figured extra comments are allways nice. I like the characters and the plot, I don't like the clifhangers! More (please)?
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. More?
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! "See into the Eyes of a Medium" is definitely one of the best stories I've read on here. Great porn... with plot. :) I love all the characters, but Suichi just made my heart hurt in the first few chapters; I tried to imagine myself in his shoes, what it'd be like to be resigned to his fate, to be stuck there forever. And Rukia; she's so frickin' awesome! Not common on most slash, to find a great female character that kicks ass. And her dressing as a boy was priceless. XD
I also really like the relationship between Kaito and Eichi, Toya and Suichi, and... yeah. They're all amazing. You're amazing.
Just a note, but you may want to turn on anonymous reviews; I got an account just to review your story, since they weren't allowed. You rock! Please keep writing.
(I'm sorry for the general rambling; I promise to write a more coherent review later. Looking so forward to the next chapter!)
I also really like the relationship between Kaito and Eichi, Toya and Suichi, and... yeah. They're all amazing. You're amazing.
Just a note, but you may want to turn on anonymous reviews; I got an account just to review your story, since they weren't allowed. You rock! Please keep writing.
(I'm sorry for the general rambling; I promise to write a more coherent review later. Looking so forward to the next chapter!)
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's crazy!!! No way!
T__T 40,000,000? Gah! Poor Suichi! He and Toya just started getting things on...=(
Thank you btw!! I loved every little single bit of the chapter, and the added Toya-hotness~
I wonder who's Azami Tottori... I'm still in shock of the situation!
It was soooooo sweet up till that last bit!
You left me with a cliff hanger so update soon before I die of curiosity :D
please?
And I feel your pain dear. Your story has two thousand and something hits, you DESERVE some reviews.
Well, till you update again, toodles~ =]
T__T 40,000,000? Gah! Poor Suichi! He and Toya just started getting things on...=(
Thank you btw!! I loved every little single bit of the chapter, and the added Toya-hotness~
I wonder who's Azami Tottori... I'm still in shock of the situation!
It was soooooo sweet up till that last bit!
You left me with a cliff hanger so update soon before I die of curiosity :D
please?
And I feel your pain dear. Your story has two thousand and something hits, you DESERVE some reviews.
Well, till you update again, toodles~ =]