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Merry meet,
I have just found your story. I wished I haven't found it so late in the piece. I love your style and the story you are writing. You had me crying a couple of times. I love your char's and were they are going. I am a big fan of the fairy tales you are using. I find you have done them good. I can't wait to see what happens. I am sorry this isn't much of a review. I just wanted to say I love your story and it has moved me greatly.
-Hallows

I love this! Fairy tales are my favorite and this is a very good retelling. I hope you continue to update. I can't wait for more.

You're doing pretty good, I really enjoyed how this story is leading to, the account of the two children were very cute and entertaining. I'd like to see how this story extends. ;)

I cant wait for the rest!

Hey, this is pretty good. The narrative is fast-paced and detailed, although you might need to check for spelling. Still, I really like this fairy-tale-esque style of this story, and I'd really like to see how it'd turn out.