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for His Little Piece Of Heaven

by dark1starr

person Solitude
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you just ended one good story and start another one. I am so happy. I couldn't stop reading and I happy the chapter are a pretty good length. I really didn't think the mother would be so trained, but I guess so had an entire life with that treatment. Now, for the hero....could it be the BROTHER.

Oh, I do hope so. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person maccam
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow very sad story. yes where are the heroes???
can't wait for more!!!
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did she die and go to Hell? So this is what I missed by not going to College, I thought it was all about advancing your career opportunites and what not. But it is also apparently avoiding obbsessive men. Well this is a bit different then your other stuff (aside from the whole dominance thing) But why exactly is he allowed to get away with all this stuff? And would her parents think it a little strange that she would be leaving school for two monthes and leaving the country with a guy she barely knows? Write more please.