rate_review Reviews

i like this so far, but wouldn't darien want to tell blake where he is? if they are such good friends blake should be slightly worried when he can't find dorien.

I really like the story! Please continue. Don't be sorry about writing long stories. I love long stories, I hate the short skimpy ones, that seems hurried. Update soon.

I really like this. Good job so far.

Very good story! The characters are fascinating and almost real, often with these types of stories the characters seem flat against the plot, but you've written them very well with motives, emotions and distinctive personalities; which makes it quite an enjoyable read. However, I must admit to a certain confusion at times; often you have one character speak but have another character's description afterwards, for example one time Darien spoke but after you said something like 'Sebastian raised an eyebrow' - which makes it sound like Seb said the sentence rather than Darien. I really do look forward to reading more though ;)