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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do hope u continue this, it seems like a cute story I would like to find out if he stays with the rich hottie^_^ hope to see new ch
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't discontinue the story, please !!
I like it....although I'm not good at reviewing, I'll try to do it from now on, for every new chapter that you wrote....just don't laugh at it, 'cause actually I can't write a damn thing...
I think the story has " pretty woman" vibe in it...it's pretty tame at first, but I'm sure you're gonna spice it up in the future....
I like it....although I'm not good at reviewing, I'll try to do it from now on, for every new chapter that you wrote....just don't laugh at it, 'cause actually I can't write a damn thing...
I think the story has " pretty woman" vibe in it...it's pretty tame at first, but I'm sure you're gonna spice it up in the future....
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just want to let everyone know I still working on this story. I've got another idea in my mind for a Naruto story and I've kinda been working that out. But dont worry there's a new chapter on its way!
-Cianis DeRolionus
-Cianis DeRolionus
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah~~ I am exited! I almost thought Darien is going to leave.. more please~
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im glad you didnt abbandon this story ive been waiting to see a new update
i really like the way youve set this out
i really like the way youve set this out
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huh, do you mean to say you are actually writing your chapters into the add-a-chapter page and you aren't using a word processing program to write them first? Yikes!
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No.... I just started writing the second part of the chapter.... and forgot to save it. My bad....
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, I hope you update soon. I just think things seem a little rushed but other than that thumbs up I love it. But um I just hope Darien doesn't forget about Blake!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it alot!!
Make more!!
Make more!!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi new reader here.. i like your story... more please?