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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Poor Moku. Keep it up!
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww! poor moku! whats gonna happen next?
looking forward to next chapter!! : )
looking forward to next chapter!! : )
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH This looks so good. I really like it. I hope you update soon :D
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so cute I like it. write more please
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes please do continue with the story. things seem to be becoming more interesting. I'd definitely like to read more of this. update when you can..but DO continue, please :)
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've peaked my interest with this story. Not exactly sure where the story line is going, but I would like to find out, so I hope you'll continue.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey! update this soon, but you do need a spellcheck, but i know how notepad is, it sucks. but i like the story!
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue. its a little dark, but i think thats what makes the story. i hope you finish it, look foward to reading more of your writting.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good though you'd probably get more reviews and interest if you put it in the slash section aswell as this one
i cant wait to read your next chapter!!! I loved the suspence
i cant wait to read your next chapter!!! I loved the suspence
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. I can tell it going to be a good one. Please update soon. I wonder what's going to happen (mmhh)
I hope he doesn't suffer too much, Please. Update soon.
I hope he doesn't suffer too much, Please. Update soon.