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for Silent Relationship

by NekoiHiwatari

person sadistic_darkbitch
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kaito is an idiot. Anyway I like the formatting batter so that's good. I also like the use of thought and not speech kudos to making us think of them as talking when they are not. i also think Moku is an idiot so the couple is a match made in heaven...lol joking keep up the good work and don't make us wait so long nxt time ok :D
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Kaito! I can't imagine being ignored for so long! I totally understand Moku's anger, but come on! You gotta talk things out. Ignoring the person is not going to help things. I could never be like Moku; I get angry and the person knows it b/c I can't shut up! Hahahha

Anyway, can't wait to find out what Moku's going to do!

And I'm glad you updated; I missed this story!!!
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. Casey's funny! XD Will Moku forgive that idiot? Hmm... Now I'm curious and will patiently wait for more! XD Thank for the chapter! XD
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused; it seems that I read this last chapter already. Did you repost it?
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, just remembered why I like this one :) Looking forward to the next chapter- don't be gone too long!
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should look at the chapter. I couldn't read it... There are some odd letters when the signs should be... I don't know if it's just me or everybody else but I really want to read the chapter, but like this it's too annoying.
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading Ch. 4. I had originally read this story months ago, but reread it when I saw it was updated. Ok, I'm hoping in the next 2 chapters that Moku finally forgives Kaito. (Did I spell those names right?) I think I'd be going crazy if I were Kaito. I mean, come on! A whole week of silence or yelling, is enough! I think he's gets the point. I'd be more upset that I was almost mugged. Kaito apologized how many times???? Give it up already Moku; it's not like he left you disfigured or something!

Anyway, great story; I'd really like to hear some decent dialogue between these two!
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that chapter was so difficult to read. I think you're computer was sicking in these O's everywhere and it was so distracting and confusing; it took me longer to read it. Maybe you should go back and edit it, take out all those annoying O's.
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work!!! There's are some weird symbols spread throughout the words, so I don't know where that came from. Great work!
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story i hope it will be updated soon enough. I can't wait for wats nxt.

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