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Sorry to hear that life has been treating you so shitty and wormy, but life has a habit of doing that to everyone once in while...not that, that makes it any easier to deal with at the time![thanks for the most vivid visual] Just know that you're not alone, and at time things just simple suck big time for a while. Don't give up, just use your angst to fuel your writing [remember when you write your in full complete control... while real life doesn't give you that lovely options. Keep writing I can't wait to read more. Hugs G

YAY! You updated! I love the new "love rival" dynamic you put in. It will probably make things more interesting. I'm sorry your life has been a "pile of rotting shit which just became maggot infested" I'm sure it will get better! Look foward to more!

I am reading this! And I hope that things end up looking back up for you by the time you post the next chapter! Moku is adorable and I really want him and Kaito to get to a good place :)

Good Story, like the characters, hope the guys rebuild the trust between them and Moku talks more. And they get back to doing the nasty real soon! Cal the Gslinger

Heah remember me?

I love the total utter love that is in their relationship! Moku may call it "puppy love" but it really seems like love. When they are upset when they see the other upset and when they are going to such great lengths to understand and respect one another.

I hope to read more of this story once you get out of the writer's block. And if I could help, I would suggest adding a new element to the situation...like a family member coming in to object their relationship, or someone coming in top snatch one of them away(like Moku, cause he is so cute), or something like Kaito had to leave for some competition. Just suggestions....I'll be happy as long as you continue!

Finally the silent one speaks but i still want to kick his ass though kudos to kaitou trying not to be a typical male but i also want to kick his ass so overall good chapt :D

Well, thank God they're at least communicating now! lol It's about time!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever your're able to update! Have a great summer!

Yes I agree quiet passive Moku should have some say in their sexual relationship, but seme Kaito is use to being the aggressor and taking charge and yes he got a little out of hand that time and lost Moku's trust, but sometime sex in males is just sudden random instinct... it's Moku's submissive fault too for not standing up for himself harder, sooner and keeping a gentle reminding leash on his favorite Horn-dog, so the strong martial art boy doesn't get out of hand. Have you asked yourself why you write Moku as the silent one... why is he that way??? Every character's motivation should have a logical reason! Hope you don't mind my thoughts I am not trying to be pushy, just helpful... please don't give up on your story for I'd like to read more. Calanthee the Gslinger

there is a manga that is just like this.... is this a fanfic of that manga or something you came up with on your own?

I really liked this chapter. I'm enjoying this story more and more. The development is great! I wonder what will Kaito do now when he finally realizes that a simple "I'm sorry" will get him noewhere. Moku's afraid of him (I like the way you described his fear) and he'll have to work veeeeeeeeery hard to regain the lost trust. And a guilty Kaito is also great! XD
All in all, great work!