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by chochang

schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much... it's funny and original and fresh... you should continue with it! :)
person Rosa
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heya! Very good start - esp. with the characterisation. It's definitely promising material, so here's hoping you update soon. I would love to read the rest of Dee's and Ry's story.

Cheers,
x Rosa

P.S. By the way, extra kudos for knowing what grammar, punctuation and spelling is! :-)