rate_review Reviews

For the most part this was confusing for me at first and the only reason I kept reading it was because of Una (I started with the list of the two lover's universe from 1 till etc). The only criticism I really have is I am not sure why this story did not stop when the "key" was found and both died....I guess for me that would have been a logical place to end. I actually had to push myself though the first parts until Nax gets introduced (it's not like I liked Nax more but I guess that is when the story started clicking into place inside my head). This is the 3rd story I have been disappointed that is not completed... although less than Wild Born (guess interest in the story must have waned? but I love husbandwife so whatever). To me it seemed to be slow and than build so fast that I wished there was more building. I guess it's been awhile since this has been updated, but I just wanted to say that it was fun read for me...but probably not better than "Tweak". I just have a have a question in Tweak Shin and Ash meet and The god (Harella-shay? sorry forgot the spelling) alludes to them being reborn, is Ayato and Rava them? I can't see how it can be, Ayato is a god...can mortals even become gods in this world? meh dont answer me if this is going to be answered in the universe I am only at "Partners".

wow i can really relate to the 2nd life stated for Ayato
i know when i was adapted all i could think about was how to fit in or not make them mad at me really deep and amazing writing

Wow, sometimes we don't really see that our own world is being reflected into the stories that we write or that it's what helps us grow. I'm glad to see your update and I hope to read more on how your characters grow as the updates come up.

It's a real pity this story hasn't gotten more attention. It's a lovely tale - somewhat disorienting to read at times due to the flowing narrative, but that's not a bad thing. It does a good job at revealing the world in bits to make the reader curious about the world of the story, and the characters are engaging.

Whether or not you decide to write more of it, I've greatly enjoyed reading this.

Sorry for the longer absence,I..was sooooo sick !_!
We had the first real virus infect of the Autumn here the last days,hopefully it is also the last!
Anyhow, I loved your update, It made me smile ^___^

Wah~~ Is this the end of Namesake? It sounds like it's going to continue but I'm not sure! A sequel maybe? Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho! -runs off to look at Ayato's stories-

9 shhh... and rava has the key! i wonder what una will say when he finds out

10 1 piece... of shit!

aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Tyze died... that sucks... I known he was gonna leave,.... but it be nice to think he lived to find a happy life after una

of gods and children
I really like Una
still getting to know Ayato