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Well I think its really lame that all these people are obviously reading this story and no ones giving you any reviews. For what its worth, I think your story is awesome, and have enjoyed every update so far. I would be bummed if you didn't continue this, and I know everyone else would too, even if they won't say so!

Good stuff. Look forward to more. the insest is amusing but i think it will be more fun to see him spread his dominance on other girls ( not make a huge harem that just gets annoying but more like one night stands on his terms.) i guesse you could call it rape but with the fun little mind control device its consentual lol

Last two chapters were great! I thought his grandmother was kind of a strange choice, but you pulled it off well. I would love to see a hot young cousin or something appear in the future. Keep up the great work!

Holy shit, amazing story! One of the best I've read in a while. You've got great attention to detail, and great flow to your narrative as well. Please continue this!