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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooooh i like it!
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, how sad/happy this story makes me.
Isn't it sad when you want something, but in the end, you'll have no choice but to destroy half of the tings in your life just to get it?
Might as well have no regrets from the get-go.
Your writing is rather good. Though, I have one suggestion to make.
I've read many of your stories. Your earlier works are some of my favorites. But I have a small issue with these ones you release now. Like you just hurry over certain bits. Your writing seems to be becoming hasty to the point where, you don't give me time to taste the details of your story because you hop along far too quickly.
Slow down the speed. Linger on details (But not too much! We don't need this becoming an Elfen Lied episode.) and allow me to enjoy it. (I hope this makes some sense to you... if not... um. E-mail is conveniently placed right there. Drop me a note.)
Do continue though. :D
Isn't it sad when you want something, but in the end, you'll have no choice but to destroy half of the tings in your life just to get it?
Might as well have no regrets from the get-go.
Your writing is rather good. Though, I have one suggestion to make.
I've read many of your stories. Your earlier works are some of my favorites. But I have a small issue with these ones you release now. Like you just hurry over certain bits. Your writing seems to be becoming hasty to the point where, you don't give me time to taste the details of your story because you hop along far too quickly.
Slow down the speed. Linger on details (But not too much! We don't need this becoming an Elfen Lied episode.) and allow me to enjoy it. (I hope this makes some sense to you... if not... um. E-mail is conveniently placed right there. Drop me a note.)
Do continue though. :D