rate_review Reviews

This story is realy good so far. The characters are very well developed and you can really tell how their personalities suit them. I really hope that you continue to write this. Please update soon.

I am really liking this so far. I hope poor Arty doesn't stay so acidrent prone- I don't know if his new clothes will last. Lots of humor and well defined personalities. Nice job !!!!

Uh-oh. Who did Jayden date? Personally, I don't think it'd be Evan, because I doubt that Evan would do that to Artemis; besides when he left the beach he said he was headed home, right?
That mall trip went so fast! But you really showed how Jayden interacts with people, and I think that's important to know in order to fully understand his character.
One question: the bad luck that Artemis experiences in this chapter- both Evan and Jayden refer to a black cat as the source. Is this going to be a recurring theme in your story, and does this have anything to do with your title?
.........hehe. I guess that's two questions. ^_^
Can't wait for the next update!!!
Much Love
Dee

Another chapter! These boys are just full of sexual tension! And is Jayden actually being -friendly- to Evan!?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Much Love
Dee

Cuuute! ^_^ The dynamic between Arty and Jayden reminds me of one of my best friends and I. Especially because he's always cold, and I'm always warm. The only thing that's different is that there's no crush(that I know of) and I'm the extrovert and he's the introvert. I like this story. Poor Evan! Jay will attack him if he tries anything!
Can't wait for the next update!
Much love
Dee

Love it!