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for Gothic Desires

by dark1starr

schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THEIR BOTH PREGNANT. OMG soo cool. So very cool. Guess the Energizer bunnies packing some real powerful juice.

And now a daddy for Starfyre????? Omg this is soo becoming a great little drama. Can't wait for more.
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely write, Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow can I have that bunny?

Great chapters really. Absolutly loved them.

Except her mother. But was really glad the royal family stuck up for star. makes me love them more
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My gods where can I find that prince at???? I swear if he kept his pants on I would be amazed. Maybe get him some anti-viagra maybe?

But my god her mother barging in to her room at that hour? Then calling him a rapist cause of a little consentual bondage? Bitch is what I call her.

Hmm what will happen to our triad of lovers in the next chapter of Gothic Desires?????
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story leading up to the sex as much as the sex thanks very much for posting it.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
6am. god i would be throwing her out. queen or no queen.

great chapter, god i would have let him have blue balls thats for sure.
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it already. Just like i love all of your stories. I've been late to work twice because I sat here reading them all back to back. Though, I have one thing to ask. What is with the white hair? I mean...It's frequently used in your stories and I was just curious....
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's like my signiture I suppose. That and I am totally attracted to the idea of white hair. If I could have it pure white hair without destroying my own hair with bleach..I would. I couldn't be a gambler with a tell tale signiture like that,lol.

Started another story too. And yes..she has white hair. Oh well..If we can't look like what we want to IRL, that's what Fantasy is for. But thanks for the review! i appreciate it. You too Lady Pandora.

Starfyre
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading Gothic Desires. I read the whole thing in one sitting. I think that it is a great story, and I hope that you will be adding to it. I can wait to see what happens next between Andrew and Starfyre.

MentalCloud
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness. so much cumming my gods.

and a 2 day sex marathon if she isn't pregnant i will be suprised.

great new chapters, can't wait for the new ones with the plot.