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by marylee

person Petrez
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Death and rebirth poem! Not emo like people's!!!

But seriously I find only one flaw, and that’s when you are writing a line and it continues to the next it should be lower case, it makes it less confusing.

Ex.

Line one
continues to line two
Line three
Does not to line four

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