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for Left In the Past

by enellis

person Sheireen
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it and would have loved to read more.
It's really sad that you haven't continued the story.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Check your post, FarFallen, surely the chapter was longer originally?
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good contents, needs a touch-up in presentation. Double-spacing paragraths makes huge difference; allowed HTML codes can be found at

Info/Support -> Resources/FAQ -> Site FAQ (Posts From Admin) -> HTML for Stories
Overall, a good start; I would like to read chapter 2.