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schedule
April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it and would have loved to read more.
It's really sad that you haven't continued the story.
It's really sad that you haven't continued the story.
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Check your post, FarFallen, surely the chapter was longer originally?
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good contents, needs a touch-up in presentation. Double-spacing paragraths makes huge difference; allowed HTML codes can be found at
Info/Support -> Resources/FAQ -> Site FAQ (Posts From Admin) -> HTML for Stories
Overall, a good start; I would like to read chapter 2.
Info/Support -> Resources/FAQ -> Site FAQ (Posts From Admin) -> HTML for Stories
Overall, a good start; I would like to read chapter 2.