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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update once a week? you dirty liar. how dare you write such an engaging story, promise updates, then vanish???? do you know how it hurts me??? will darius find her, will they fall in love?? so many unanswered questions. please update immediately!!!! please please please!! <3
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far, can't wait to read more :)
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Oh awesome! She's escaped! Goooooooooooooooooooooooo Robi!!!!!!!! LOL
And awww! Thank you for that dedication! This story is amazing! I'm going back and rating you 9 5+'s for simply being an amazing author.
*hugs tight* I can't wait to see what happens next. YOu've set the foundation for some serious trouble and chaos. *grins*
Love Nila
And awww! Thank you for that dedication! This story is amazing! I'm going back and rating you 9 5+'s for simply being an amazing author.
*hugs tight* I can't wait to see what happens next. YOu've set the foundation for some serious trouble and chaos. *grins*
Love Nila
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, and oh so cute. I dont know why really I mean, theres no real romance other than Nevi and Narobi, But its still so cute.
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i suppose i should make an account if i can be notified when your story gets updated. i love it, but i do understand what it's like to get busy and not update. i have one that got hundreds of reviews like 4years ago, i never finished it lmao. anyway have fun at college and try to update soon, i don't get into stories much so... it means it's really good if i do... and with this one.. i have!!!
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good, but where is it going?
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely loving this story, Please update asap!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intriguing. please continue
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just found this story and couldn't stop reading till I finished all 4 chapters.
Now to plot I know it's just beginning, so there's time for that and I have a pretty good sense of Nyrobi's character. However, I do have questions about her and her people. Why was she so confused about where she was. Didn't her people ever get to know what was beyond their forest. I mean they are a race of female warriors, didn't they think to Know Thy Enemy? Nyrobi doesn't know the language, she was confused by the town, and didn't even know which way she would go to get home if she could escape. This is very surprising since she was to be the LEADER of her people next year. Also, if no men are in her race how do they have babies, what do they do with the male babies, why did she not share the same views about males as her people? Lastly, I was a little disappointed by the way she was captured, in fact a bunch of them were captured. I know they were meant to be caught or kiddnapped. However, it could have been a better fight or at least an actual fight. Not just have a big net thrown on her - she supposed to be a warrior right? I didn't get to see that part of her or her people?
As for your writing, it's very good. Like I said I could stop reading. However, I am more than just a little afraid that don't plan to make this "a happy story". How about a "pleasantly nice" story or although there are set back the main character get to a "satisfactory place" story? NO, those stoies kind of annoy me, but what is worse is a good story with an incredible horrible ending. However, you said nothing is set in stone and THAT is the reason I am willing to read more. Well actually I can't wait to read more.
Now to plot I know it's just beginning, so there's time for that and I have a pretty good sense of Nyrobi's character. However, I do have questions about her and her people. Why was she so confused about where she was. Didn't her people ever get to know what was beyond their forest. I mean they are a race of female warriors, didn't they think to Know Thy Enemy? Nyrobi doesn't know the language, she was confused by the town, and didn't even know which way she would go to get home if she could escape. This is very surprising since she was to be the LEADER of her people next year. Also, if no men are in her race how do they have babies, what do they do with the male babies, why did she not share the same views about males as her people? Lastly, I was a little disappointed by the way she was captured, in fact a bunch of them were captured. I know they were meant to be caught or kiddnapped. However, it could have been a better fight or at least an actual fight. Not just have a big net thrown on her - she supposed to be a warrior right? I didn't get to see that part of her or her people?
As for your writing, it's very good. Like I said I could stop reading. However, I am more than just a little afraid that don't plan to make this "a happy story". How about a "pleasantly nice" story or although there are set back the main character get to a "satisfactory place" story? NO, those stoies kind of annoy me, but what is worse is a good story with an incredible horrible ending. However, you said nothing is set in stone and THAT is the reason I am willing to read more. Well actually I can't wait to read more.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting stoey.