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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good beginning! The last scene was especially yummy. I am eagarly awaiting chapter two
-And, thank you for your advice and I would love if you beta'd for me! I'm still learning English and the grammar rules are so confusing!
-And, thank you for your advice and I would love if you beta'd for me! I'm still learning English and the grammar rules are so confusing!