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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
una hermosa y tiern histoeia, espero que continues con otros capitulos porquw es muy interesate, ana maria
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really interested in this story!
I would make one tiny, itty bitty suggestion- I think it would help the reader alot if you broke up the paragraphs.
I have been told by friends that they are turned off by stories that look like one long block. It would be a shame for people to skip over this story
because of that tiny little detail.
but it's great, and I think you should continue!
XOXO
I would make one tiny, itty bitty suggestion- I think it would help the reader alot if you broke up the paragraphs.
I have been told by friends that they are turned off by stories that look like one long block. It would be a shame for people to skip over this story
because of that tiny little detail.
but it's great, and I think you should continue!
XOXO
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool story keep going
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it certainly caught my interest. I would really like to continue reading it...