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Adam Lambert? Who- *remembers American Idol* Oh, right. Sorry, I don't watch the show. X3

Anyway, ol' Petey needs some sense slapped upside his head. I'm sorry, but it's like he doesn't realize not all gay dudes want to be like him. They don't have to be out in HIS definition of the word. Will Shawn slam him against a locker? Please? If not, I'd be happy to do it. >3

My withdrawl-induced violent streak aside, this chapter (do all five parts count as one chapter?) is really getting... Damn it, I can't think! DX *glares at her mom* Anyway, I'll just say that I'm liking the chapter, and I look forward to next Sunday's installment.

You know, Peter might just be one of the funniest characters in here. Every time he opens his lips I see mountains of glitter and stuffed animals falling out.

Every character, you say? Is that named ones only, or are we going to see random people from the hospital as well? Or evil Dream!Anthony? Does he even count as a character?

And we're back to Emmy. Whenever things go bad (read: whenever Shawn acts like an ass and then gets upset about it), there's always Emmy to set things straight. Or something like that. Can't wait to see what she does or says. Also, whatever the hell is up with that one guy whose name I can't remember at the moment. Bret? Yeah, that's it, I think. So, whatever's wrong with Bret. Also, the deal with Anthony and whether either of them (Shawn or Anthony) intend to even try to salvage their relationship. But I'll stop before I get in Wild Mass Guessing mode.

i'm thinking, maybe anthony likes drama...i mean that's how he found shawn, during all his drama about running away from home and stuff...well anywho, just a thought...i wonder where all of this is going now...i kinda want anthony and shawn back together but some part of me wonders if they should break up for college and shawn should find someone else or at least try dating others in college...oh i don't know...but this was a great chapter and i can't wait for the next one.

Aww, I'm sad such a great story is wrapping up so soon. I don't wanna lose the only fanfiction that I actually wait for. :K I hope you at least start on something else to keep me and the people who feel the same happy. :)

Yay, new chappy! Umm..so, Shawn is still a whiny brat, so that's consistent. I kind feel like someone should give him a beat down, but he's already gone through that bullying thing and it hasn't helped yet. It would just give him more fuel for his whiny fire. Luckily, I have a soft spot for less than likelable characters. Of course, Anthony maybe could put a little more thought into their relationship, even if he's done with it and just wants to pretent to be straight. I think Bret should get some professional help, but I work in mental health, so that's a biased opinion, doesn't mean that the character would do that. And, Emmie's (is that her name?) a smart lady, somehow she's got to step in with some wise advice.

Just started reading your story. All caught up now. Love it a lot. I'm not sure why I like it. Honestly, I normally like to read about typical pretty boys and all that. I like these ordinary characters though. Shawn annoys me in a way makes me feel like it would be kinda funny if he got totally screwed over. Yet at the same time, I keep rooting for him and I can't figure out why. All of the bickering between Shawn and Anthony reminds me a lot of dating in high school, so in other words it seems pretty realistic. I like Keith. I always wondered if the popular kids and jocks knew that they were part of this ridiculous fake friend hierarchy. I assumed they were probably not smart enough to figure out what kind of system they were wrapped up in. Not sure why I thought that. Anyway, reading the populars views on their roles is interesting.

hey and great to have you back...this story hasn't lost anything...in fact i think it's getting better...the characters are truly emerging as strong characters and i'm loving it...thanks for the update and i look forward to your weekly updates!

Oh god... now shawn is a necrophile? lol

about bret and him being suicidal; is he the one who sent shawn that valentine's letter, but he somehow found out about shawn already being taken, and now he's suicidal because he can't live without his love???

can't wait for the next chapter! by the way, i really don't like where you left off the chapter. :( cliffhangers and me don't get along.

i love you!
ASOTA

You can't reveal everything in a five-parter, dude. ;3 Still, having an update every week is gonna rock! XD

Well, if a breakdown can happen to a minor character it can sure as hell happen to Anthony, so of course I'm worried. =( And both Keith and Anthony were asking for it, though I get the feeling Shawn's gonna get his, eventually. XP Karma's a bitch.

Sorry, Sage, can't stay! This a pre-work review, and I gotta go. X3 See ya!

Well, it's certainly been awhile. Shawn seemed kind of. . . menstrual, this chapter. In an amusing way, of course; the kind where it's only amusing because you're just reading it and don't have to interact with the guy physically. Still, had some very funny moments. Also, Keith in locker = teh funnyz.

Though it ended with a bit of a downer (at least he's a minor character). I see that as having some affect on Anthony in the near future, maybe an opportunity for Shawn to try and cheer him up?

Also, hooray weekly updates.